Post by *~Noelle Marie Stryder on Apr 23, 2009 18:50:58 GMT -5
P E N D I N G !
your application is ALMOST perfect. I need you to explain what type of wanderer she is because there are two different ones. An Infected Wanderer and a Human Wander. Also, I need to to elaberate more on her history like did her parents die because of Butterfly, was she effected by it, did someone in her family use butterfly-- because obviously right now in this era normal doesn't apply; people are miserable because of their loss. However if her life is really normal then that's fine too but there's not much plottage there.
Just fix those things and I'll accept you, hun ^^
your application is ALMOST perfect. I need you to explain what type of wanderer she is because there are two different ones. An Infected Wanderer and a Human Wander. Also, I need to to elaberate more on her history like did her parents die because of Butterfly, was she effected by it, did someone in her family use butterfly-- because obviously right now in this era normal doesn't apply; people are miserable because of their loss. However if her life is really normal then that's fine too but there's not much plottage there.
Just fix those things and I'll accept you, hun ^^
